Does Size Matter?
We can say it doesn't, but we all know it does. So tell me---exactly how big do you like 'em?
This'd probably be a good time to tell you that I'm talking about chapter size. One thing I've learned through writing and editing is that there are often multiple potential chapter breaks. Sometimes an obvious stopping point screams out, but what to do when that doesn't happen?
For example, I've finally gotten back to my WIP and hammered out at least the beginning of a first chapter. I've reached a point where I could end the chapter...or I could keep going. Either way it'll work just fine from a story perspective. As it stands right now, I'm at 2055 words, roughly 8 pages in print. That strikes me as rather too short. Is it? Or is short a good thing? And do I need to aim for consistent chapter length throughout the story (I typically try to)? Or is content all that matters and I should stop asking these questions?
1. As a reader, would you say you generally prefer long or short chapters (how do you define long & short)?
2. What's too long? What's too short?
3. Do you prefer chapter length to be consistent throughout a novel, or do you like to mix it up, or do you not really notice.
4. Does your chapter length preference differ depending on the media on which you're reading: hard copy; computer; e-reader?
Thanks for your input. And now, on to Meet an Author Monday. We're doing something new for the new year!
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So sign up for the hop on January 31 and post a picture of where you write. Tell us how you started writing there, why you like writing there, etc. etc. We want to know all about where the magic happens!
This'd probably be a good time to tell you that I'm talking about chapter size. One thing I've learned through writing and editing is that there are often multiple potential chapter breaks. Sometimes an obvious stopping point screams out, but what to do when that doesn't happen?
Should word count be considered?
For example, I've finally gotten back to my WIP and hammered out at least the beginning of a first chapter. I've reached a point where I could end the chapter...or I could keep going. Either way it'll work just fine from a story perspective. As it stands right now, I'm at 2055 words, roughly 8 pages in print. That strikes me as rather too short. Is it? Or is short a good thing? And do I need to aim for consistent chapter length throughout the story (I typically try to)? Or is content all that matters and I should stop asking these questions?
A little help, please:
1. As a reader, would you say you generally prefer long or short chapters (how do you define long & short)?
2. What's too long? What's too short?
3. Do you prefer chapter length to be consistent throughout a novel, or do you like to mix it up, or do you not really notice.
4. Does your chapter length preference differ depending on the media on which you're reading: hard copy; computer; e-reader?
Thanks for your input. And now, on to Meet an Author Monday. We're doing something new for the new year!
On the last Monday of each month, authors on the hop are asked to feature a post on a unified topic. This month's topic is:
Where You Write
So sign up for the hop on January 31 and post a picture of where you write. Tell us how you started writing there, why you like writing there, etc. etc. We want to know all about where the magic happens!
Comments
It hard for me to read chapters that are over 20 pages. Again, it depends on what is happening, but by the 20th page it's harder stay focuse. By then, I just want to reach the end of the chapter.
As for too short of a chapter, I don't believe there is such a thing. I love clear and to the point chapters, even if it's only a few sentences or a few paragraphs.
Hope you have a wonderful day!!
That said, I flee from books with long pages of dialogue. I once read where dialogue over five lines spoken by one character turns the reader off. For me, this is true. Ditto for stuff lined up like a train after He said............. Oy!
But I think for a first chapter short isn't bad as it provides a boost of momentum from the get-go...gives a quick hook to ensnare you into committing more to the longer chapters to follow.
And I don't mind if chapter length is varied as long as it maintains a continuous flow and rhythm that is appropriate for the story.
Bravo on completing the first chapter of your next manuscript!
Kitty - I hadn't heard that tip about the 5 lines of dialogue. Thanks!
I think of a chapter as a little breather in the story. I can put it down if I want. But if the chapter break is good, I'll have to keep going to see what happens. I'd go for whichever break seems more inticing.
Just my two cents...
On my current WIP my chapters seem shorter. They are averaging between around 12. This is double spaced of course.
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Michael
I worked today... I've done about 1500 words today...only 500 more that's nothing. I am sticking to my schedule.
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Michael
Super short chapters - like one page or a paragraph tend to annoy me. Dan Brown has a few of these in his books, and to me they feel like "Oh, this character elsewhere in the story forgot to tell you..." Very rarely is an interruption like that welcome.
As a writer, my chapters vary from 3K to 7K I think. I think the longest might be 20 pages? I guess I should go get a copy of my book and check!
I would say write and worry about the rest later :)
On a more fun note. You book looks like a great read. I've got to get a copy. As a Taurus you know I want it signed. So do you have copies at home? if not, When I get from Amazon will you sign it for me. That is my new thing for this year. I want my blogger friends books and signed.
Here's my email and let me know... mculi at aol dot com
Thanks, Nicki
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N. R. Williams, fantasy author
As a writer, my chapters typically come in around 2500 words, or less. Never less than 4 pages though. Varying the chapters helps to pace the book too. If things are happening really fast, a shorter chapter will add to that feeling. If you want to draw the story out, give the reader a breather, longer helps to do that.
So that book averaged 5 pages per chapter? Ay yi yi!